Autumn in the Forest

Autumn in the Forest

Thursday, January 5, 2017

"Peer Pressure"

Excerpt from "Season of Crows." Petal, the white mousemaid with creamy tan patches scatter across her fur, experiences pressure from others to copy them.
 
As the days grew ever hotter and stickier, Petal became so well-adjusted to life in Evershade that she frequently embarked on short excursions alone. She visited the Vaults for an acorn pot of mushroom soup ingredients and half of a black walnut. She made several trips to the stream for fresh water, and she even braved the critical eye of Maple with a visit to the bakery to compliment the plump mouse on her fruit ’n nut bread, which secretly pleased Maple so much that she gruffly sent Petal packing with half a dozen honeywheat rolls and a braided apple ’n onion loaf.

It was on one particularly hot morning that Petal came upon Willow and her friends cooling their paws in the creek. Willow was dangling the bonnet Ash had made for her down her back.

“Petal!” Willow exclaimed when she saw the pretty young mousemaid approaching.

“Hello, Willow. I see Ash finished making your hat. It looks lovely.”

“It is, isn’t it? Thank you for asking him to make it for me.”

“You’re welcome, but Ash is the one to thank. He made it well,” Petal replied.

“Yes, Willow, you should thank him,” one of Willow’s friends said, her words dripping with hidden meaning.

The two young mousemaids with Willow were the same ones who had accompanied her at First Harvest. The one who had spoken was taller than Willow and lanky, a permanent look of displeasure with the world and everyone in it etched across her face. The second mousemaid was the shortest of the trio and stockier. She glared at Petal suspiciously from behind the taller mousemaid.

“Petal, these are my friends. This is Aster,” she said, gesturing to the taller mousemaid, “and this is Thistle.”

Neither mousemaid attempted to greet Petal and instead stood staring at her for a few uncomfortable moments.

Petal cleared her throat.

“I love your markings. It’s called ‘tipping,’ isn’t it?” Petal asked, trying to get them to open up.

A wicked smile played at the corners of Aster’s mouth. She regarded Petal coolly. “Why, yes, it is. It is called tipping.” Aster's face morphed into a sinister mask. “Oh, I have a wonderful idea. Thistle, Willow, why don’t we show our new friend, Petal here, how to tip?”

Willow’s eyes grew wide. “I don’t know....”

“Quiet, Willow. Don’t you think tannin would look beautiful against such pale fur?” Aster said, taunting her friend. Willow said nothing. “What—are you afraid everyone will think she’s prettier than you?”

“No,” Willow said sullenly.

“Do you think Ash will think she is prettier?” Aster sneered.

“No—that’s not it at all!”

Petal looked from Willow to Aster and back again. The conversation made her uncomfortable, but she could not think of a polite way to leave.

“I think tipping is very interesting, and it makes all three of you look beautiful, but I’m not sure that tipping is for me.”

“Of course it is. Everyone does it. Even Ash did it,” Aster said. “You do want to fit in, don’t you?”

“Everyone has been so nice to me—I feel that I already do,” Petal replied, feeling as though she was being lured into some sort of trap.

“They’re just too embarrassed to tell you the truth. But I’m not. If you want to fit in here, you have to tip. There's no other way.” Aster rose to her full height and gazed down at her triumphantly.

Petal considered this carefully. It was true she didn't quite feel that she completely fit in because of her coloring. And tipping was almost a rite of passage by the sound of it. Besides that, she did admire the markings that Willow and her friends bore. It might be interesting to have her fur a different color for a change.

“I suppose it would be all right,” she said hesitantly.

“Mint!” Aster said as Thistle chuckled behind her. “Why wait? I have a pot of tannin in my burrow you can use. Come on.”

Before Petal could change her mind, she found herself being led away from the Fray where Willow, who watched them go, stood in place as a hint of fear rippled through her eyes.

High above, another set of eyes stared down at her from The Corridor.
 

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